We watched one final TED Talk today. It is posted below.
Finally, I handed back your opinion paragraphs. I mentioned that there were a couple of areas that need to be improved:
- explanations
- clear & concise topic & concluding sentences
Remember the KISS principle -- KEEP IT SIMPLE SILLY!
More importantly, I gave everyone the chance to redo their opinion paragraph. The new topic is which TED Talk would you rate as the best? Everyone's topic sentence will be "I think the best TED Talk is ____________________" You don't have to write anything more complicated than that.
This new paragraph is due FRIDAY!
Even more importantly, I posted a Survey Monkey on Edmodo. This is where you will vote for your TOP THREE TED Talks. Please make sure you complete this survey by tonight!
- explanations
- clear & concise topic & concluding sentences
Remember the KISS principle -- KEEP IT SIMPLE SILLY!
More importantly, I gave everyone the chance to redo their opinion paragraph. The new topic is which TED Talk would you rate as the best? Everyone's topic sentence will be "I think the best TED Talk is ____________________" You don't have to write anything more complicated than that.
This new paragraph is due FRIDAY!
Even more importantly, I posted a Survey Monkey on Edmodo. This is where you will vote for your TOP THREE TED Talks. Please make sure you complete this survey by tonight!